Great individuals are no exception. However, it is misguided to focus on their personal faults rather than their achievements. To do so is to miss the importance of their work, without which our culture would be worse off. For example, Abraham Lincoln was arguably one of the greatest Presidents the United States has ever had. He managed to bring the country through a substantial revolution and to end slavery despite powerful economic and social forces working against him day and night.
However, Lincoln was not a saint. He was moody and prone to depressive funks that disrupted his family life and slowly eroded his marriage. These personal faults did not reduce his success as a President. While we do not have to ignore questions about whether he was a depressive, we also should not consider them an important part of his political heritage. Criticisms of this sort are entirely relevant, whereas personal criticisms are not.
Another example of a great individual dogged by criticism of his personal conduct is Albert Einstein. Einstein developed a number of the most important theories in modern physics, including an explanation of the photoelectric effect, an explanation of Brownian motion, special and general relativity, and Bose-Einstein quantum statistics.
However, Einstein also had life-long problems with infidelity. The fact that he cheated on his wife is in no way relevant to his accomplishments in the field of physics, and indeed most references to Einstein properly ignore it. Global notifications Settings Mark All Read. It is currently 14 Sep , Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions.
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I'll try it now. Guide to Perfect 6. I did put a lot of time in it the first time Being a non-native speaker and having not written a damn essay of any kind in many many years, I was very scared of the AWA. So, I went through every guide that I could find and wrote nearly essays.
Even had a friend grade them for me Anyway, for my second time, I just looked over my templates I created and wrote one of each the day before test just to refresh my memory on faster typing without making too many typos So, here it is Enjoy, and please do not blame me if the 6. General Structure Intro - Restate argument, point out flaws or state intention to discuss them below 1st Para - First, The argument claims that First, the argument readily assumes that This statement is a stretch The argument could have been much clearer if it explicitly stated that Second, the argument claims that This is again a very weak and unsupported claim as the argument does not demonstrate any correlation between In fact, it is not at all clear If the argument had provided evidence that Without convincing answers to these questions, one is left with the impression that the claim is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.
In conclusion, the argument is flawed for the above-mentioned reasons and is therefore unconvincing. It could be considerably strengthened if the author clearly mentioned all the relevant facts In this particular case Without this information, the argument remains unsubstantiated and open to debate.
The following appeared in the editorial section of a national news magazine: This electronic game rating system is not working because it is self regulated and the fines for violating the rating system are nominal. As a result an independent body should oversee the game industry and companies that knowingly violate the rating system should be prohibited from releasing a game for two years.
Point out flaws in the argument's logic and analyze the argument's underlying assumptions. In addition, evaluate how supporting evidence is used and what evidence might counter the argument's conclusion.
You may also discuss what additional evidence could be used to strengthen the argument or what changes would make the argument more logically sound. The argument claims that the electronic games rating system, although similar to the movie rating system, is not working because it is self regulated and violation fines are nominal, Hence, the gaming rating system should be overseen by an independent body. Stated in this way the argument fails to mention several key factors, on the basis of which it could be evaluated.
The conclusion relies on assumptions, for which there is no clear evidence. Therefore, the argument is rather weak, unconvincing, and has several flaws. First, the argument readily assumes that because the electronic game rating system is self regulated, it is not working well. This statement is a stretch and not substantiated in any way.
There are numerous examples in other areas of business or commerce, where the entities are self regulated and rather successful.
For instance, FIA, the Formula1 racing organization is self regulated. Yet, the sport is very popular and successful, drawing millions of spectators around the world each year. Tickets are rather expensive, races are shown on pay-per-view, and nearly all drivers are paid very well. Another example is the paralleled movie rating system that the argument mentions. The author fails to clarify whether it is working well, but it is clear that the movie rating system is pretty well received by people, who often base their decisions to go see a movie with kids or not on the movie rating.
How to Tackle the Analytical Writing Assessment. Essay Section Guide Contents. Analytical Writing Basics Analysis of Argument: How international students should prepare for the essay section.
Ten most common errors: In the thousands of essays we have graded, 10 errors consistently recur. What not to do: How to Structure Your Essay Pace schedules for both essay types so that you get everything done on time. Templates for both essay types to help structure your essays Ch. How to Write Effectively Basic rules of grammar that you must know.
How to write effective and concise arguments. Writing drills and exercises to test your writing skills.
GMAT Essay (a.k.a GMAT AWA) Tips: How to Start Strong! The GMAT Essay, also called the GMAT Analytical Writing Assessment, or AWA, appears at the very beginning of the GMAT. The essay requires you to read a short argument and make a written analysis of the argument. This opening GMAT task has a 30 minute time limit.
Write an essay like a prose or story. The E-rater simply doesn’t like this. Rather, your essay should be logically clear, and succinct in content, more like a summary of strategy report from McKinsey.
GMAT Essay Section Guide The Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) is how business schools evaluate your writing skills with one 30 minue section essay. Your essay will be evaluated by an "E-rater" (a computer "bot" grading program that scans essays). GMAT Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) About GMAT AWA. The more you practice writing essays, the more comfortable you will become in handling the variety of topics on which essays in GMAT AWA are based. At ExamFocus, we provide you with a myriad of essay prompts, to help you write these essays with ease.
4) When you feel you’ve created a few solid outlines, write a couple essays. Make sure to spend no more than 25 minutes on each essay. If you’re an Economist GMAT Tutor student, upload each completed essay through the Economist GMAT Tutor dashboard. GMAT essays aren't as important as quant and verbal, but you still need to do a good enough job. In this article, one of our expert instructors explains how to create a template for an adequate, effective essay.